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can you review the first half of this article (background story) https://newbeelearn.com/blog/what-happens-when-you-get-2nd-page-hn-2024/ https://newbeelearn.co
by pdyc 3y ago
can you review the first half of this article (background story) https://newbeelearn.com/blog/what-happens-when-you-get-2nd-page-hn-2024/ https://newbeelearn.com/blog/what-happens-when-you-get-2nd-p... it was my attempt at being funny.
- pryelluw 3y agoI can’t tolerate self deprecating humor. Your post should not aim to be funny at your expense. Shouldn’t have the tone of “oh poor me”. I’d rewrite it and remove the humor. Only add humor if it adds value to the information. And that’s the crux of it. Focus on giving as much value as possible. Forget the rest.
- pdyc 3y agothanks for reviewing it.