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This prose desperately needs an editor and a rewrite pass, which would be unremarkable in technical fare—but in an argument about the information density of pro
by riwsky 3y ago
This prose desperately needs an editor and a rewrite pass, which would be unremarkable in technical fare—but in an argument about the information density of prose, it severely undermines the author’s trustworthiness.
- riwsky 3y agoTo illustrate: “The answer is not immediately obvious. Indeed, word problems in these forms are not only long-winded but also prone to misinterpretation. I may have wanted to ask you something but you may have understood (and answered) something else entirely. Moreover, I may have misspecified what I originally wanted to ask. All in all, this seems like a rather unfortunate way of asking questions of such nature. What if I change it to something like this instead:” Could shrink to: “The answer is not obvious. Wordy descriptions of math problems are prone to miscommunication—and tediousness. Compare:”
- pkoird 3y agoGuilty as charged. I'm definitely aware of my tendency to repeat things. In my admittedly flimsy defense, it stems from my fear of being misinterpreted.
- eyeundersand 3y agoFunny seeing you here. I'm 99 percent certain you went to school with my brother at Pulchowk. Blog looks interesting. Will keep an eye out.