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That is all very good feedback. I'm wondering what I should do about the graphic. Maybe I should get rid of it altogether -- since this will be an ebook it is r
by jnorthrop 14y ago
That is all very good feedback. I'm wondering what I should do about the graphic. Maybe I should get rid of it altogether -- since this will be an ebook it is really only there to help visitors recognize that the site is about a book. Given your point about not recognizing it as an ebook landing page it looks like it fails in that department anyway.
- arkitaip 14y agoMaybe all it really needs is a touch up so that it properly signals BOOK. But then again, you could use that incredibly valuable space by driving the visitor to the call of action. Here are some suggestions on how you can do that: * testimonials/pull quotes * powerful bullet list with 5 reasons to buy the book * some kind of preview/teaser/sample. Even if it's not ready to be publish, why not offer a couple of pages for free?
- arkitaip 14y agoI quickly redid the design of the landing page to make it easier to read and act upon. Obviously just some input for a proper a/b test. I wanted to add a testimonial or link to an excerpt but it's getting late over here :) http://imgur.com/fEV6Q http://imgur.com/fEV6Q
- jnorthrop 14y agoThat is super helpful. You have gone above and beyond! I owe you one.