I don't agree with parent: the design isn't sleazy at all. If anything I think your design needs more WOW, not less. There's no sense of drama that highlights t

I don't agree with parent: the design isn't sleazy at all. If anything I think your design needs more WOW, not less. There's no sense of drama that highlights the importance of the topic (but you got something with the "Avoid The Pitfalls of Others" section which, if redesigned, could be incredibly useful).