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Thanks for that. Do you have a good example of someone doing it better? It ended up long because there is so much I want to say. Do you think it would be better

Thanks for that. Do you have a good example of someone doing it better? It ended up long because there is so much I want to say. Do you think it would be better reformatted as a couple of larger blocks of text?

arkitaip 14y ago
I don't agree with parent: the design isn't sleazy at all. If anything I think your design needs more WOW, not less. There's no sense of drama that highlights the importance of the topic (but you got something with the "Avoid The Pitfalls of Others" section which, if redesigned, could be incredibly useful).