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eBooks are my thing. The overall feel of the page is that of spammy and sleazy "eBook" sites. The wide margins with text in the center in a Too Damn Long scro
by mikecane 15y ago
eBooks are my thing.
The overall feel of the page is that of spammy and sleazy "eBook" sites. The wide margins with text in the center in a Too Damn Long scroll. At the end I expected a Two For One Offer so I could Start Making Money Now.
- jnorthrop 15y agoThanks for that. Do you have a good example of someone doing it better? It ended up long because there is so much I want to say. Do you think it would be better reformatted as a couple of larger blocks of text?
- arkitaip 15y agoI don't agree with parent: the design isn't sleazy at all. If anything I think your design needs more WOW, not less. There's no sense of drama that highlights the importance of the topic (but you got something with the "Avoid The Pitfalls of Others" section which, if redesigned, could be incredibly useful).