I read Ra and I loved it, but it's imperfect. It could use an editor. Antimemetics, being SCP-related, comes with a hefty dollop of magical realism. Ra, to me

I read Ra and I loved it, but it's imperfect. It could use an editor. Antimemetics, being SCP-related, comes with a hefty dollop of magical realism. Ra, to me, felt like a rocket ride as new ideas, twists, and exponentially escalating stakes get thrown at you. The pacing is very jerky, and I can very much understand if people just nope halfway through. In particular, the characters... suck (my apologies, Sam)