I think that the author is making a mountain out of a molehill. But even aside from that, they don't really give an argument for the thesis. Things like "Focuse

I think that the author is making a mountain out of a molehill. But even aside from that, they don't really give an argument for the thesis. Things like "Focuses on activity, not outcomes" are not evidence for something being harmful. It's just arguing against buzzwords with buzzwords.