It reads like someone took a longer paper, cut out individual sentences or fragments, and then put a fraction of them back together without bothering to see if

It reads like someone took a longer paper, cut out individual sentences or fragments, and then put a fraction of them back together without bothering to see if it made sense. It lists 9 references but never cites them directly. So there's no way to tell what came from where. It's also just not copy-edited at all. There's _three _ spaces before the third sentence, which begins with a fragment of a different sentence