It's worth mentioning that this is a playground specifically for Show HN (technically I don't think you're just supposed to post landing pages for private produ

It's worth mentioning that this is a playground specifically for Show HN (technically I don't think you're just supposed to post landing pages for private products). The home page is a bit more 'standard'. Perhaps that's clearer for you? Cleaning up the grammatical information to make it a bit less information dense is definitely on our todo list though.