It would be more intellectually interesting if you told us why you hate it, and perhaps suggestions on how to improve it, or better alternative solutions. I'll

It would be more intellectually interesting if you told us why you hate it, and perhaps suggestions on how to improve it, or better alternative solutions. I'll add that "hate" is an overused word that tells us almost nothing, other than your displeasure. Show, don't tell. Instead of telling us that you hate it, show us some concrete facts and specific details. "Avoid describing the author's analysis and instead describe the scene or subject in such a way that readers can draw their own conclusions."