Not a bad post for HN, but this kind of submission should be made as a URL submission with the original site/page/post title, with commentary or summarizing don

Not a bad post for HN, but this kind of submission should be made as a URL submission with the original site/page/post title, with commentary or summarizing done as a comment, which can be done simultaneously via the text box on the submit page. Not using the original title as you have done is considered against the guidelines. I'd delete this and resubmit as it will likely be flagged.