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This was my first impression as well. Additionally, by using multiple columns to avoid a second page, OP makes the document harder to read and thereby obscures
by argiopetech 3y ago
This was my first impression as well. Additionally, by using multiple columns to avoid a second page, OP makes the document harder to read and thereby obscures his full work history.
I recommend, following any rework, handing this to a few friends (preferably non-technical), in person, for feedback on readability and appeal.