This piece reads like it was written by a Microsoft PR person, and not a investigative journalistic piece in Wired. After reading this[1] I can't help but be

This piece reads like it was written by a Microsoft PR person, and not a investigative journalistic piece in Wired. After reading this[1] I can't help but be extremely critical of articles written this way. (or most magazine articles these days) [1] http://www.paulgraham.com/submarine.html http://www.paulgraham.com/submarine.html