In some paragraphs you put “a hat on a hat”. That is, you pile on the snark on top of an already meme-y paragraph and it feels like “too much” of something that

In some paragraphs you put “a hat on a hat”. That is, you pile on the snark on top of an already meme-y paragraph and it feels like “too much” of something that works better subtly. As others have stated, get to the point sooner.