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Thanks! Exactly the type of feedback I was after. You feel it's the joke / script that needs tightening? or the actual delivery?

• jfengel 3y ago
  The delivery pace is dictated by the format. I might tighten it a bit but it's effectively doing the thing it's aiming for. Which means that the text needs to be tightened within an inch of its life. That's tricky to do right.
  • bryantgillespie 3y ago
    Agreed. Thanks for clarifying.