Such a poorly written article doesn't encourage me to use a brand new and untrusted database; if you can't write a clear article, why would I trust your databas

Such a poorly written article doesn't encourage me to use a brand new and untrusted database; if you can't write a clear article, why would I trust your database code? This is a thinly veiled ad for Rama but the explanation for why it's so much "better" isn't clear and doesn't make much sense. I strongly urge the author to work with some who is a clear and concise technical writer to help with articles such as these.