Personally I find your ordinary English writing more fluent seeming, and the LLM version seems more like a foreign speaker doing somewhat awkward, choppy, mildl

Personally I find your ordinary English writing more fluent seeming, and the LLM version seems more like a foreign speaker doing somewhat awkward, choppy, mildly ungrammatical line-by-line translation. That might be confirmation bias though. Neither of them is a dazzling gem of English prose style, but both of them seem more than fine as effective communication from a non-native speaker/writer. I certainly couldn't do any better writing in a second language. So I say write with whichever process brings you more joy or seems more convenient.