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Much appreciated, I am always open for further feedback too! (If there are ways I can improve my writing)
by MrBruh 3y ago
Much appreciated, I am always open for further feedback too! (If there are ways I can improve my writing)
- howon92 3y agoMy feedback: keep the same style :)
- listenallyall 3y agoArticle was good, and your instincts proved correct -- but if you want some truthful feedback, your headline is clickbait. You pwned a single vendor that happens to work with some fast food restaurants, you did not find a vulnerability within the restaurant companies themselves. "I pwned an applicant management system" is a lot less compelling than the headline you used.