It makes sense in as much as I understand what you are showing us. However, it's not clear to me that the solution you've come up with (for a very broad, abstra

It makes sense in as much as I understand what you are showing us. However, it's not clear to me that the solution you've come up with (for a very broad, abstract "problem") makes sense. If you're looking for feedback on the video, I can understand what you're saying and follow the logical flow. I would still attempt to find a motion graphics person that does product videos and engage them to do a video which gets me excited. As it stands, it's pretty dry and I can't understand in what situation I'd use it. One suggestion is that you clear out all of the junk data that you have in the app, as it's both monotonous and distracting. It makes the production feel half-baked. Don't be discouraged, getting feedback early is the best way to prevent time wasted on things people don't need.