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> A mix of new competitors, partner withdrawals, changing audience habits and pandemic-era disruptions led to E3’s collapse, ending years of attempts to resusci
by timdiggerm 3y ago
> A mix of new competitors, partner withdrawals, changing audience habits and pandemic-era disruptions led to E3’s collapse, ending years of attempts to resuscitate the event, which began in 1995.
This poorly worded sentence can easily be read to state that the years of attempts to resuscitate E3 began in 1995.
- DonHopkins 3y agoMaybe they were trying to prove they weren't using ChatGPT.
- HlessClaudesman 3y ago...and phrase your results slightly awkwardly like a time pressured human journalist (churnalist) would.
- havblue 3y agoThe author is fairly well-versed about video games and I've known him online for a long time from a site called gamecritics. I'll allow that's a poorly worded sentence though.