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I had such a hard time reading that article… shes in leicester, then on computers, then in india… ending every paragraph with a rehashing of the same questions
by MrJagil 3y ago
I had such a hard time reading that article… shes in leicester, then on computers, then in india… ending every paragraph with a rehashing of the same questions she asked in the introduction. Love the topic, but couldn’t get through.
- marak830 3y agoI strongly agree. There was so much information left on the wayside, a little bit of location jumping in the beginning. The images needed flavour/location foot notes. A deep dive, which flavours combine (surely they could find an ex-industry for this?) To get a rough approx. There were parts - where they were talking about splitting oils(?if I remember correctly) that I'd have liked more info on. Long form /short detail. I'll end up researching it myself, which is good for me, but only me.