Not the GP but it could be the length of your sentences. I personally think it reads fine however, since I also write with pretty long, heavily punctuated, sent

Not the GP but it could be the length of your sentences. I personally think it reads fine however, since I also write with pretty long, heavily punctuated, sentences I’m comfortable reading it and it feels natural to me. The biggest complaint people have about my writing is the length of the sentences and feeling like I’m expressing too many ideas at a time.