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Congrats on the launch! Some feedback: "A hosted real-time platform" This is okay. "that gives your project a lift to the forefront" This is fluff. It
by dwynings 15y ago
Congrats on the launch!
Some feedback:
"A hosted real-time platform"
This is okay.
"that gives your project a lift to the forefront"
This is fluff. It'd be better if you were more specific and focus on end user benefits. For instance, "Easily create real-time apps with worry-free scaleability"
There should also be a big sign up button directly underneath this tagline. There's really no need in the top nav to highlight the fact that you're on the home page – what should be highlighted is the Pricing & signup button.