I quite like this as an exercise in thinking a bit differently about writing. Something missing though is examples - I'd love to see a few raw and final pieces

I quite like this as an exercise in thinking a bit differently about writing. Something missing though is examples - I'd love to see a few raw and final pieces to see how to use it in practice, as well as expanding on the specific recommendations. I also see this as something to mix in with bits of specific desired prose, much like markdown can always have html plopped into it. When I'm coming up with ideas I often find some really clarifying sentences and metaphors that the piece shapes itself around, which I'll often just pre-highlight so readers know what to take away.