If that's what you want (grimace, grimace), I'd change the tone to more of a rant. Not a rant, but more of a rant. But if you ask me, it has a wonderful feel t

If that's what you want (grimace, grimace), I'd change the tone to more of a rant. Not a rant, but more of a rant. But if you ask me, it has a wonderful feel to it already. The thing about the word "manifesto" is that it doesn't match the tone. A manifesto is something that points out the flaws and announces it is time for change. The unabomber wrote a manifesto. Marx wrote a manifesto. The Agile guys wrote a manifesto. Manifestos are rants with calls to action. This didn't have enough rant to it. Like I said, a very tiny nit. If it weren't for my hang-up with the word, I wouldn't have mentioned it. An altogether terrific job.