I think you are being a little pedantic and playing word salad with the word "needs." They need to work on it or their life will most likely suck. That better?

I think you are being a little pedantic and playing word salad with the word "needs." They need to work on it or their life will most likely suck. That better? I feel that was implied in my original statement: >People like that really need to work on fixing it. It can obviously be crippling to their career and lives.