Very easy to offend or unprotectet to criticism people will not react differently to your just "sligthly" toned version. Slight toning is insufficient when the

Very easy to offend or unprotectet to criticism people will not react differently to your just "sligthly" toned version. Slight toning is insufficient when the reaction is that implosive. And I am unsure if this is where the change need to happen - considering that this is critiques class not universal sensitivity training -, but in the receiving end instead. The tone of the original wasn't that harsh, the cut part was more like illustrational/explanatory.