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You and I are what Kurt Vonnegut called Bashers: > Swoopers write a story quickly, higgledy-piggledy, crinkum-crankum, any which way. Then they go over it agai

You and I are what Kurt Vonnegut called Bashers: > Swoopers write a story quickly, higgledy-piggledy, crinkum-crankum, any which way. Then they go over it again painstakingly, fixing everything that is just plain awful or doesn’t work. Bashers go one sentence at a time, getting it exactly right before they go on to the next one. When they’re done they’re done. I always found this frustrating in high school, as some assignments required submission of a first draft, second draft, and final version of a paper. I always wrote the final version first and then worked backwards to created a second and then a first draft by removing sentences and generally making it worse.

DoctorOW 3y ago
> I always found this frustrating in high school, as some assignments required submission of a first draft, second draft, and final version of a paper. I always wrote the final version first and then worked backwards to created a second and then a first draft by removing sentences and generally making it worse. I always did this as well. You are the first other person I've heard describe that.
- teddyh 3y ago
  Here’s another person reporting the same thing: <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtIzMaLkCaM#t=5m10s https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtIzMaLkCaM#t=5m10s> (It’s Larry McEnerney’s very excellent lecture The Craft of Writing Effectively, aimed at writers who are either academians or otherwise experts in some field.)
noduerme 3y ago
Just as a side note, I worked for several ad agencies with art directors who did the same thing. We'd make the final ad, then screw it up intentionally and show it to the client so they'd spot the obvious flaws/mistakes, tell us to fix them, and then we'd give them what we'd already done. It's not a strategy I use in my own work now, but it taught me something interesting about the psychology of clients. I think there are better ways to let them know they got their money's worth, like writing full explanations of your choices and thought processes. But intentionally sabotaging your first draft is definitely a well-worn method in the art and design world.
- spanktheuser 3y ago
  Every ad / design agency I’ve worked for engages in this practice. Futhermore, in the large corporate rebranding exercises I’ve witnessed approximately 75% of the engagement consists of make-work designed to justify the price. From a purely psychological perspective I find it fascinating. If you want to get a handle on how it looks IDEO is a company that publishes and speaks on ”process” quite prolifically. Keyword: “Design Thinking.”
  - noduerme 3y ago
    Funny to hear you validate this. What's even funnier is catching my own junior designers trying to do it to me, and totally calling them on it.
  - stakhanov 3y ago
    This is pretty chilling to hear. One of my big quarrels in my professional life is how clients/bosses want exposure to creative process but can't really handle it, if it's anything but linear, which, in actual reality, it never is. Going through the creative process without exposing the bossman to it and then playing "creative process theater" for them is a solution to the problem, because the theater caters to their unrealistic expectations, not to reality. But, the more tightly controlling they are, and the shorter the reporting interval, the more difficult it becomes to execute on this charade. This is particularly poignant, because the point applies not just to ad agencies and design work, but also other types of creative endeavor like software engineering. I really pity the wretched souls having to do daily standups, who end up getting caught in the crossfire there. In particular: Bosses have unrealistic expectations of what creative process looks like. Those unrealistic expectations get reinforced because so much of the creative process they witness is "creative process theater". And then the poor soul who finds themselves in a situation where they have no other choice but to expose their boss to real creative process obviously can't deliver on their boss's expectations.
    - browningstreet 3y ago
      Most bosses have never gone through the creative processes that are being discussed here. Or if the boss did it for bread they won’t know how to apply the process to cars. A corporate rebranding is done many times by an agency but once or twice, ever, by the individuals on the client personnel. The boss who knows how it’s actually done will get less theater than the uncertain or over-eager boss who’s doing their first agency rebrand. And, sometimes, the marketing exec is party to the theater because they know a straight up offer to their upline won’t get accepted. Put another way: I’ve done rebrands for agencies themselves. They’re still prone to the errors even though they know how the sausage is made. It’s an innate human tendency. And btw — nothing is pretty. Branding, marketing, coding, project management, budgeting. It doesn’t have to be bullshit, but process is not often going to be pretty.
Avshalom 3y ago
I would just re-write my one-and-final draft by intentionally-poor hand because I knew no one was gonna call that bluff.
huehehue 3y ago
https://blog.codinghorror.com/new-programming-jargon/ https://blog.codinghorror.com/new-programming-jargon/ > Duck: a feature added for no other reason than to draw management attention and be removed, thus avoiding unnecessary changes in other aspects of the product.
- voltaireodactyl 3y ago
  In animation they called it “the thumb on the frame” for obvious reasons.
hinkley 3y ago
I am also a Basher. But I've always suspected it as a sort of perfectionism that ultimately holds you back from getting better. I have a couple of pastimes where I've gone out of my way to try to avoid this. I find it is often easier to 'change your ways' in one context than globally. But it's also a sort of 'end of the beginning' rather than 'beginning of the end' in spending more energy on doing and less on fussing about doing it well. Take that too more and you're trying to do well on your first try. If you ever played board games with someone who operates this way, it's exhausting. The fact that it's meant to be fun probably amplifies that experience, but I do wonder sometimes how people experience me and whether they think the same sorts of things I think about a perfectionist gamer.
dceddia 3y ago
Fellow Basher here. I’ve heard the advice to “just get it all on the page and edit later” so many times and it has never really made sense to me. I write something like Shlemiel the painter’s algorithm from this old Joel on Software article [0]. Write a bit, reread everything, tweak, write some more, reread everything again, tweak. The re-reading cycles aren’t always back to the very beginning, sometimes it’s just the current paragraph or sentence. But I’d definitely say I edit as I go. I’ve tried not doing this, but I never get very far with that before it starts to stress me out that the writing isn’t coming out right. And then afterwards, read the thing another 50 times just in case, especially if it’s an email. 0: https://www.joelonsoftware.com/2001/12/11/back-to-basics/ https://www.joelonsoftware.com/2001/12/11/back-to-basics/
microtherion 3y ago
The iconic example of a Swooper is Jack Kerouac, who typed up "On the Road" on a scroll of paper, so he would not disrupt his flow by having to switch pages: https://www.npr.org/2007/07/05/11709924/jack-kerouacs-famous-scroll-on-the-road-again https://www.npr.org/2007/07/05/11709924/jack-kerouacs-famous... But contrary to legend, it appears that said scroll did not represent the first draft, but the final product of numerous editing iteration.
lannisterstark 3y ago
>by removing sentences and generally making it worse. Can I offer another POV? If those sentences weren't needed, they weren't needed. You didn't really make it worse.
- pests 3y ago
  I think they meant they were needed and removing them _did_ make it worse, because they were needed.
satvikpendem 3y ago
I just submitted the same draft all three times. I might make minor changes based on feedback but generally there wasn't any backlash from teachers for not changing enough things, if your initial draft was already high quality.
quickthrower2 3y ago
Someone should make the enso for bashers! Not sure what that would look like. Maybe a text editor is enough. I am not much of a writer at all but if I write a blog post I am both basher and swooper. Swooping happens after I publish. Something psychological about someone might read it motivates the swoop.
leokennis 3y ago
Today I learned I swoop the outline of my texts and then bash the sentences.

DoctorOW 3y ago

> I always found this frustrating in high school, as some assignments required submission of a first draft, second draft, and final version of a paper. I always wrote the final version first and then worked backwards to created a second and then a first draft by removing sentences and generally making it worse. I always did this as well. You are the first other person I've heard describe that.

teddyh 3y ago
Here’s another person reporting the same thing: <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtIzMaLkCaM#t=5m10s https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtIzMaLkCaM#t=5m10s> (It’s Larry McEnerney’s very excellent lecture The Craft of Writing Effectively, aimed at writers who are either academians or otherwise experts in some field.)

noduerme 3y ago

Just as a side note, I worked for several ad agencies with art directors who did the same thing. We'd make the final ad, then screw it up intentionally and show it to the client so they'd spot the obvious flaws/mistakes, tell us to fix them, and then we'd give them what we'd already done. It's not a strategy I use in my own work now, but it taught me something interesting about the psychology of clients. I think there are better ways to let them know they got their money's worth, like writing full explanations of your choices and thought processes. But intentionally sabotaging your first draft is definitely a well-worn method in the art and design world.

spanktheuser 3y ago
Every ad / design agency I’ve worked for engages in this practice. Futhermore, in the large corporate rebranding exercises I’ve witnessed approximately 75% of the engagement consists of make-work designed to justify the price. From a purely psychological perspective I find it fascinating. If you want to get a handle on how it looks IDEO is a company that publishes and speaks on ”process” quite prolifically. Keyword: “Design Thinking.”
- noduerme 3y ago
  Funny to hear you validate this. What's even funnier is catching my own junior designers trying to do it to me, and totally calling them on it.
- stakhanov 3y ago
  This is pretty chilling to hear. One of my big quarrels in my professional life is how clients/bosses want exposure to creative process but can't really handle it, if it's anything but linear, which, in actual reality, it never is. Going through the creative process without exposing the bossman to it and then playing "creative process theater" for them is a solution to the problem, because the theater caters to their unrealistic expectations, not to reality. But, the more tightly controlling they are, and the shorter the reporting interval, the more difficult it becomes to execute on this charade. This is particularly poignant, because the point applies not just to ad agencies and design work, but also other types of creative endeavor like software engineering. I really pity the wretched souls having to do daily standups, who end up getting caught in the crossfire there. In particular: Bosses have unrealistic expectations of what creative process looks like. Those unrealistic expectations get reinforced because so much of the creative process they witness is "creative process theater". And then the poor soul who finds themselves in a situation where they have no other choice but to expose their boss to real creative process obviously can't deliver on their boss's expectations.
  - browningstreet 3y ago
    Most bosses have never gone through the creative processes that are being discussed here. Or if the boss did it for bread they won’t know how to apply the process to cars. A corporate rebranding is done many times by an agency but once or twice, ever, by the individuals on the client personnel. The boss who knows how it’s actually done will get less theater than the uncertain or over-eager boss who’s doing their first agency rebrand. And, sometimes, the marketing exec is party to the theater because they know a straight up offer to their upline won’t get accepted. Put another way: I’ve done rebrands for agencies themselves. They’re still prone to the errors even though they know how the sausage is made. It’s an innate human tendency. And btw — nothing is pretty. Branding, marketing, coding, project management, budgeting. It doesn’t have to be bullshit, but process is not often going to be pretty.

Avshalom 3y ago

I would just re-write my one-and-final draft by intentionally-poor hand because I knew no one was gonna call that bluff.

huehehue 3y ago

https://blog.codinghorror.com/new-programming-jargon/ https://blog.codinghorror.com/new-programming-jargon/ > Duck: a feature added for no other reason than to draw management attention and be removed, thus avoiding unnecessary changes in other aspects of the product.

voltaireodactyl 3y ago
In animation they called it “the thumb on the frame” for obvious reasons.

hinkley 3y ago

I am also a Basher. But I've always suspected it as a sort of perfectionism that ultimately holds you back from getting better. I have a couple of pastimes where I've gone out of my way to try to avoid this. I find it is often easier to 'change your ways' in one context than globally. But it's also a sort of 'end of the beginning' rather than 'beginning of the end' in spending more energy on doing and less on fussing about doing it well. Take that too more and you're trying to do well on your first try. If you ever played board games with someone who operates this way, it's exhausting. The fact that it's meant to be fun probably amplifies that experience, but I do wonder sometimes how people experience me and whether they think the same sorts of things I think about a perfectionist gamer.

dceddia 3y ago

Fellow Basher here. I’ve heard the advice to “just get it all on the page and edit later” so many times and it has never really made sense to me. I write something like Shlemiel the painter’s algorithm from this old Joel on Software article [0]. Write a bit, reread everything, tweak, write some more, reread everything again, tweak. The re-reading cycles aren’t always back to the very beginning, sometimes it’s just the current paragraph or sentence. But I’d definitely say I edit as I go. I’ve tried not doing this, but I never get very far with that before it starts to stress me out that the writing isn’t coming out right. And then afterwards, read the thing another 50 times just in case, especially if it’s an email. 0: https://www.joelonsoftware.com/2001/12/11/back-to-basics/ https://www.joelonsoftware.com/2001/12/11/back-to-basics/

microtherion 3y ago

The iconic example of a Swooper is Jack Kerouac, who typed up "On the Road" on a scroll of paper, so he would not disrupt his flow by having to switch pages: https://www.npr.org/2007/07/05/11709924/jack-kerouacs-famous-scroll-on-the-road-again https://www.npr.org/2007/07/05/11709924/jack-kerouacs-famous... But contrary to legend, it appears that said scroll did not represent the first draft, but the final product of numerous editing iteration.

lannisterstark 3y ago

>by removing sentences and generally making it worse. Can I offer another POV? If those sentences weren't needed, they weren't needed. You didn't really make it worse.

pests 3y ago
I think they meant they were needed and removing them _did_ make it worse, because they were needed.

satvikpendem 3y ago

I just submitted the same draft all three times. I might make minor changes based on feedback but generally there wasn't any backlash from teachers for not changing enough things, if your initial draft was already high quality.

quickthrower2 3y ago

Someone should make the enso for bashers! Not sure what that would look like. Maybe a text editor is enough. I am not much of a writer at all but if I write a blog post I am both basher and swooper. Swooping happens after I publish. Something psychological about someone might read it motivates the swoop.

leokennis 3y ago

Today I learned I swoop the outline of my texts and then bash the sentences.