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Uhhh nope... The firm is named in the subheadline, and it's not a recognizable enough name to go in the headline: "Davis Polk rescinds job offers to Ivy League
by ethanbond 3y ago
Uhhh nope... The firm is named in the subheadline, and it's not a recognizable enough name to go in the headline:
"Davis Polk rescinds job offers to Ivy League students who signed Israel letters" doesn't make much sense to most readers, does it?
- starttoaster 3y ago"New York City law firm Davis Polk rescinds job offers to Ivy League students who signed Israel letters" makes sense. I think it's fairly well understood, at least to all Americans, that if you own a law firm that operates out of a high rise in Manhattan, you're probably a "top law firm."
- lcnPylGDnU4H9OF 3y agoAt that point they can just say "Top law firm Davis Polk" and then might decide that they prefer the shorter headline of "Top law firm".
- catlover76 3y agoNo, it doesn't communicate that to most readers. There are a lot of mid-tier law firms in New York City. And where in your proposed headline does it say "which operates out of a high-rise in Manhattan"? Picking on the existing headline seems pointless to me
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