Hey Alan - I know your spirits are down a bit right now, but this post has a very depressing and desperate undertone. You've gone through a lot and times are ro

Hey Alan - I know your spirits are down a bit right now, but this post has a very depressing and desperate undertone. You've gone through a lot and times are rough. I completely understand. While that may urge me (and others) to help you, I'm sure you don't want feelings of pity and desperation to be associated with your game. You used so many words telling us how we can help you that you neglected to share the most important thing (and biggest selling point): how awesome your game is and how much enjoyment we will derive from playing it. In fact, you mentioned almost nothing about the game itself. You went on and on about the importance of moving up in a list and gaining momentum, but most of us have not the slightest clue of what your game is about. Just some food for thought. Best of luck and I look forward to some followup posts.