good gracious. I think this poem might be worse than the original. Indirection, subtlety, and allusion are absolutely critical elements in poetry - maybe even

good gracious. I think this poem might be worse than the original. Indirection, subtlety, and allusion are absolutely critical elements in poetry - maybe even fundamental. There is not a hint of that in this autocompleted piece of dreck. It's more blatant than the terrible evangelical preaching-"poems" I used to see forwarded on AOL in my teens.