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Usually the HN-ification of titles makes them much better, but in this case I think the original was more accurate. This title makes it sound like all the Bay A
by raldi 3y ago
Usually the HN-ification of titles makes them much better, but in this case I think the original was more accurate. This title makes it sound like all the Bay Area refineries are giving up gasoline.
Mods, maybe prepend “Some”?
- Stratoscope 3y agoEven better, as you first suggested, I would go right back to the original title, which is clear and specific: 2 of 5 Bay Area refineries to stop making gasoline Just having a number in a title doesn't make it clickbait. Sometimes the numbers are what you need to know. And it's fine for a submitter to edit the title in the interest of clarity. I think you get a couple of hours to do this.
- dang 3y agoThanks! Fixed.