As a German this also reads like a fairly normal sentence. In written form it would have a couple more commas in German, which would make it easier to read, but

As a German this also reads like a fairly normal sentence. In written form it would have a couple more commas in German, which would make it easier to read, but when delivering a speech verbally this is taken care of by intonation and pauses anyways, turning this into a non-issue for the intended audience even in English.