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Replying to myself, can't edit (again). I eventually decided that in my previous comment we could replace "truly" with "sincerely" and it is, in my opinion, _m
by jorl17 3y ago
Replying to myself, can't edit (again).
I eventually decided that in my previous comment we could replace "truly" with "sincerely" and it is, in my opinion, _miles_ better.
I eventually also thought of a third one:
The poet is a man who feigns.
He feigns so thoroughly
that he even feigns as pains
the pains he feels sincerely.
(If one has a problem with "man"/"he", this also works:)
The poet is one who feigns.
They feign so thoroughly
that they even feign as pains
the pains they feel sincerely.