Keep on writing and working on your writing skills. There were times at which I felt that your writing got in the way of the ideas you were trying to express. O

Keep on writing and working on your writing skills. There were times at which I felt that your writing got in the way of the ideas you were trying to express. One other thing that stuck out to me was that it seems like discouragements from others have really gotten to you despite your insistence that they don't matter. Don't mind the haters and keep on working hard! Good luck.