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You misread the comment you responded to; OP agrees with you. > without any plot fundamentals that felt like a deep betrayal to the universe. There should be
by dnh44 3y ago
You misread the comment you responded to; OP agrees with you.
> without any plot fundamentals that felt like a deep betrayal to the universe.
There should be a comma between “fundamentals” and “that”
- Jagerbizzle 3y agoI believe it should have actually been a semicolon.
- dnh44 3y agoIt would have read a lot nicer with the semicolon and also if “that” were changed to “this”