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1) Fix the typos. Make the sentences sound more formal, not like you’re talking to a friend. 2) More details - “our algorithm makes sure you’re not being overc
by syndicatedjelly 3y ago
1) Fix the typos. Make the sentences sound more formal, not like you’re talking to a friend.
2) More details - “our algorithm makes sure you’re not being overcharged” sounds patronizing. Your target audience is not going to be so dull as to not question how things work behind the scenes. They don’t have time to schedule a call and hear the sales pitch