I wish you had written the essay, as that aspect about class status is coherent, but not found in the section at hand. All I get from the author is disdain, wit

I wish you had written the essay, as that aspect about class status is coherent, but not found in the section at hand. All I get from the author is disdain, with a hint that it's centered on the subject's lack of ambition. Of course I have other critiques, but to borrow a strange phrase from the movie JFK, is it worth picking gnat shit out of pepper?