Others have highlighted various issues of your resume. If I were you, I would try to make your resume fairly generic in style and simply list out your accomplis

Others have highlighted various issues of your resume. If I were you, I would try to make your resume fairly generic in style and simply list out your accomplishments. Remember that the point of a resume is not to get hired, it's to get to an interview. I would remove anything that "show's your personality" that's not an achievement.