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War Music is the name of an incomplete modern translation of the Iliad by Christopher Logue. It is without doubt one of the best poetic works of the past 100 y
by A_D_E_P_T 3y ago
War Music is the name of an incomplete modern translation of the Iliad by Christopher Logue.
It is without doubt one of the best poetic works of the past 100 years.
"Achilles saw his armour in that instant
And its ominous radiance flooded his heart.
Bright pads with toggles crossed behind the knees,
Bodice of fitted tungsten, pliable straps;
His shield as round and rich as moons in spring;
His sword's haft parked between sheaves of grey obsidian
From which a lucid blade stood out, leaf-shaped, adorned
With running spirals.
And for his head a welded cortex; yes,
Though it is noon, the helmet screams against the light;
Scratches the eye; so violent it can be seen
Across three thousand years."
The Caroline Alexander translation is much more "correct," but lacks Logue's spark of vitality and originality.
- akkartik 3y agoWho's Achilles looking at in this passage?
- A_D_E_P_T 3y agoThe scene: Achilles, having just about finished mourning Patroclus, and having agreed to fight once again on behalf of the Achaeans, wakes alone on the morning of battle. I'll give you the pages just before and after that part. Here: https://docdro.id/puR412w https://docdro.id/puR412w
- akkartik 3y agoThanks! I'll be reading it and the other links in this thread while I wait for my copy in the mail.