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I am a very picky reader, and I rarely say this, but this is an exceptionally well written piece. The pacing, the wording, the sense of atmosphere, and what to
by Scubabear68 3y ago
I am a very picky reader, and I rarely say this, but this is an exceptionally well written piece.
The pacing, the wording, the sense of atmosphere, and what to say when are just incredibly well done.
This is what writers should aspire to.
Also, great hook (we are all animals at night).
- sam537 3y agoAs an animal with similar fastidiousness, I agree. I am happy to have found this. Reminded me of After Dark by Murakami.
- wizofaus 3y agoAgreed, found myself looking for the "like" button, something I virtually never click/tap when it's the first thing in your face at the bottom of a social media post.
- tuatoru 3y agoAgreed, except for the use of "diffuse" where "de-fuse" (or defuse) was meant. Tiny subediting error.
- MarcoZavala 3y ago[dead]