I don't see anything wrong with giving a feedback such as "I would find it easier to understand if it was written lile this...". I'm just stating my preference

I don't see anything wrong with giving a feedback such as "I would find it easier to understand if it was written lile this...". I'm just stating my preference and if the author agrees (which sometimes happens), or if they don't care, they can change it, otherwise they may also ignore it.