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As far as using up their allotment of commas, you may be right. Past that it seems to stand okay.
by WarOnPrivacy 3y ago
As far as using up their allotment of commas, you may be right. Past that it seems to stand okay.
- Nick87633 3y agoSeems like they're channeling 60 minutes narration with all the commas.
- reaperducer 3y agoThe commas are fine. It's called apposition.