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As a TOTREP, Victoria would have know that people think at the margin and so she would never have asked whats-her-face for her shoes at that moment. The writer
by lusus_naturae 3y ago
As a TOTREP, Victoria would have know that people think at the margin and so she would never have asked whats-her-face for her shoes at that moment. The writer fell into a classic trap of creating a contrived situation just to get the main to meet her love interest. Good effort overall, but reads like a first draft.
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