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1. Get rid of the JavaScript. All of it. If you need JavaScript, you're doing it wrong. 2. Information density is way too low, the entire page could fit on one
by Dalewyn 3y ago
1. Get rid of the JavaScript. All of it. If you need JavaScript, you're doing it wrong.
2. Information density is way too low, the entire page could fit on one 1080p monitor.
3. I don't know what I'm even looking at immediately after opening the page. What is the information you want to convey? Put it front and center on the page, make it the first thing I see. That interactive text box is useless to me, because I don't know what anything is.
4. Gray text on white background is an insult to peoples' eyes. Use black text on white for maximum readability. You're trying to convey information here, this is not an art piece for your high school project.