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"I wish I felt something for the people we expired in my first fire fight. I didn't." I have a hard time believing you didn't feel something for the people you
by collypops 15y ago
"I wish I felt something for the people we expired in my first fire fight. I didn't."
I have a hard time believing you didn't feel something for the people you _killed_ in your first fire fight. Word selection can expose more than a writer's vocabulary range.
That sentence stood out for me for some reason, but overall, it was a great insight that's given me a lot to think about.