(OP) Agree. The original is ok though and its difficult to know which has the more appropriate take. I didn't see the NY article before posting and may not have

(OP) Agree. The original is ok though and its difficult to know which has the more appropriate take. I didn't see the NY article before posting and may not have checked it due to it often being paywall-restricted. I'd be fine with it being changed, though I'd regret the loss of the title...