> What do you think the above paragraph communicates to the reader? Nothing, really. I read the whole article and was constantly having the feeling that they w

> What do you think the above paragraph communicates to the reader? Nothing, really. I read the whole article and was constantly having the feeling that they were only a random sequence of overly technical words which after the fact hadn't conveyed any information. What an obtuse way of structuring ideas. I was thinking my English comprehension was nonexistent (which might be the case), until reading these comments here kind of confirmed me that "it's not me, it's them".