It's not a bad piece, but the writer needs to discover what the difference is between "it's" and "its." Also, it's "relativistic", not "reletavistic." [P.S. I

It's not a bad piece, but the writer needs to discover what the difference is between "it's" and "its." Also, it's "relativistic", not "reletavistic." [P.S. I'm available for all your editing and proofing needs.]